JiafanZhou
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于 2008-07-23 23:35
Haven't detailed review your document due to some busy working lately. Nonetheless, I will come back later some time to review this document. As a general, it looks good.
There is one issue that might be noteworthy is that you don't have any <b>subtitles</b> in your document at all. This is usually a bad idea for some long document. That means a reader has to complete read your document in one goal whereas not every reader could be as interested as to do so.
My 1 cent. Jiafan
When I was a kid I used to pray every night for a new bike. Then I realized that The Lord doesn't work that way, so I stole one and asked him to forgive me.
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